滬江網(wǎng)校：BEC名師評點網(wǎng)友作文（13）
網(wǎng)友作文三：
Dear Mr Chandler,
I am writing in response to your letter of 28 June 2001 about the order No. B 13/4620 .
First of all, I would like to apologize for later the late delivery of your order as a fire broke out at the end of April in our factory. As a result, we had to work overtime to reproduce ASAP. However, I deeply regret that your order was were one of a large part of the orders that have been delayed for such a terrible accident.
Therefore, as our established customer, 這里邏輯比較亂as 如果是介詞的話，是作為的意思。we will offer you additional 5% discount 5% except one confirmed in our contract as before. And the reversed correct invoice and the repaired items two new desks will would be sent to you on next week at the same time.
對題目理解有誤，是送新的桌子，而不是修好后的桌子。
I would like to assure you that we will deal with your order as quickly as we can in the future .
Yours sincerely
Band 2
任務(wù)完成的不是特別令人滿意，對題意的理解也不完全正確。請再重聽一遍范文講解。
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