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BACKGROUND:
截止至8日下午,英國(guó)如火如荼的大選已經(jīng)告一個(gè)段落。目前保守黨多數(shù)占據(jù)多數(shù)席位。具體結(jié)果如何,我們還要拭目以待。

英國(guó)大選最后關(guān)頭,候選人紛紛開始炫妻~?

CONTENT:

Ed Miliband's political future is hanging in the balance if the exit poll is correct, senior labour figures have conceded. Mandelson said it was "very difficult indeed" to see Miliband becoming prime minister if the Conservatives won 316 seats and Labour 239, in accordance with the BBC numbers.
The Labour peer and former Downing Street adviser said Miliband had done a "magnificent job" during the campaign and he would not want to see him resign. However, Mandelson sidestepped questions about whether he would like to see the Labour leader fight another election if Cameron returns as prime minister.
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KEY POINTS:
LabourEd Miliband       愛德華·米利班德
hang in the balance     生死未卜,前途難料
magnificent job?      工作出色
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Key Sentence:
這次文章不難,希望各位童鞋用心翻譯,主要是如何組織語(yǔ)序使文章更流暢。
Mandelson said it was “very difficult indeed” to see Miliband becoming prime minister if the Conservatives won 316 seats and Labour 239, in accordance with the BBC numbers.
這一句句子長(zhǎng),但是好在全部用逗號(hào)隔開,所以譯群比較一目了然。所以這里只要考慮如何組織句序就行啦~
PS: 建議把BBC這個(gè)成分放前面,因?yàn)橹形谋硎鰰r(shí)總是會(huì)先說(shuō):據(jù)...顯示/...稱。

The Labour peer and former Downing Street adviser said Miliband had done a “magnificent job” during the campaign and he would not want to see him resign.
這一句也不難,列出來(lái)的原因是因?yàn)?。大家不要誤以為這一句中提到的The Labour peer and former Downing Street adviser 是另外一個(gè)新角色,其實(shí)這里就是指Mandelson,因?yàn)殚_通使用了定冠詞the,表示特指。
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本期節(jié)目參考譯文:(參考譯文由該節(jié)目主持人提供,僅供參考,歡迎大家討論)

參考譯文1:

工黨高級(jí)官員承認(rèn),如果出口民調(diào)(結(jié)果)正確,那么愛德華·米利班德(Mandelson)稱,依照英國(guó)廣播公司(BBC)公布的數(shù)字來(lái)看,保守黨贏得了316個(gè)席位而共黨則僅有239個(gè)席位。如果真是這樣,米利班德要想當(dāng)選首相的確不容易。
曼德爾森不僅是工黨成員,還是前唐寧街顧問(wèn)。他表示,在競(jìng)選活動(dòng)期間,米利班德工作出色,而其本人也不想看到米利班德辭職。然而,對(duì)于有關(guān)“倘若卡梅倫再次當(dāng)選首相,是否希望工黨領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人參與另外的競(jìng)選”這類的問(wèn)題,曼德爾森則拒絕置評(píng)。

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