張夢琳老師對本期網(wǎng)友作文總體點評：

大部分同學的問題比較集中
1. 審題不細致，題目沒有要求的，寫了很多，這就浪費了篇幅；
2. 句子顧前不顧后，前后時態(tài)，時間矛盾；
3. 詞匯基本功有待加強；
4. 沒有商務背景，作文中的句子空洞，沒有實際意義；
5. 用了很多主觀態(tài)度的句子。

本期作文范文參考：

Report on staff recruitment

As our company is developing several new products, the department of R&D needs new staff urgently to help design and monitor our products.

Thus we need to recruit 35 new staff, including electrical engineers and product developers. All of them should have at least two years ' experience in relevant field. More specific requirements will finally be decided in a few days.

As to recruitment methods, the disadvantage of relying on recruitment agency is that we need more time and procedure than we can afford. So I suggest we turn to a more direct way of Newspaper advertisement, which has been used many times and proved effective.

Comparing the two newspaper, Echo and Chronicle, we prefer the former because though it charges ￡500 more than the latter, the general readers are 400,000 more, most of whom are highly-educated.

We are sure to get reply soon after we launch the recruitment campaign.

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