【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思寫作】媒體類真題9分范文一(1/2)
來源:滬江聽寫酷
2014-04-10 17:28
媒體類真題
【Advertisements?play?a?major?role?on?TV?in?market?economies.?Despite?the?benefits?of?such information,?many?people?criticize?the?role?of?TV?advertising.?
To?what?extent?do?you?agree?or?disagree?with?their?view?】
9分考官范文來啦。
Pat老師評語:盡管結(jié)構(gòu)很平淡,但精準地使用了linkers和加分詞匯(尤其是動詞)
學習愉快喵~O(∩_∩)O~
Unlike the Internet, where we can often disable advertising windows, we cannot screen TV advertisements out of our lives. The question is, is the price worth paying? Let us consider some of the points that may be made in defence of TV advertising. Firstly, advertisements provide information, and information is essential to a modern economy because it brings those who have products and services into contact with those who want to buy. Indeed, advertisements are the most efficient means of such communication and help to keep the price of consumer goods down. Secondly, the advertising industry is a significant source of employment. Thirdly, advertisements are often charming and well-filmed, a source of entertainment in themselves.
不像網(wǎng)上彈出的廣告那樣可以隨手關(guān)掉,面對生活中的各類電視廣告,我們實在是無處可逃。可問題是,這些廣告值得我們看嗎?
先來考慮幾點電視廣告值得我們?yōu)槠滢q護的好處吧。首先,廣告提供了當今經(jīng)濟社會中最寶貴的東西——信息,因為它能把那些擁有產(chǎn)品和服務(wù)的人與那些想購買這些東西的人聯(lián)系在一起。確實,廣告是承載這種交流以及抑制產(chǎn)品價格的最有效的方法。其次,廣告業(yè)也可以滿足大批就業(yè)人群的需要。第三,多數(shù)廣告都是充滿魅力且精心制作的,本身也擁有很高的娛樂性。