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Changes of fuel prices in 2 states in USA from 2005 to 2009

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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.

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2012.12.08

In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

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不少同學(xué)誤讀題目，導(dǎo)致寫(xiě)作跑題。Live individual 意味著不結(jié)婚，不和父母住一起；small family units理解為小家庭，可能只有夫妻兩人或是一家三口?？蓮男睦?、社會(huì)和科技角度出發(fā)闡述目前這一問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生的原因和對(duì)于個(gè)人和社會(huì)的影響。

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第一段：開(kāi)頭段

背景介紹引入法

第二段：產(chǎn)生的原因

1、城市生活: 流動(dòng)性大,不穩(wěn)定

2、養(yǎng)孩子成本上升

3、工作時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，家庭時(shí)間少

4、傳統(tǒng)價(jià)值觀變化

第三步：導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果

1、老齡化，勞動(dòng)力缺乏，醫(yī)療開(kāi)支增加

2、幸福感降低，孤獨(dú)增加

3、傳統(tǒng)文化丟失

新東方在線雅思范文指導(dǎo)：

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In modern society, young people prefer to stay apart from their parents and live alone in a metropolis. Further, they have a tendency of postponing their parenthood until late 30’s or even early 40’s.

This trend may involve some factors and the most rooted one can be modern urbanized lifestyle which features high level of mobility and instability of economic situation. In addition, young people facing enormous competition and stress at workplace, have to focus on their jobs and therefore have little time for their families. Obviously under such circumstance, committing to a serious relationship or starting a family, which means tremendous responsibility and dedication, is not a preferable choice. Also the extended family is no longer a realistic option and is replaced by the nuclear one. The cost increase of raising a child is another barrier to late parenthood, and this is especially obvious in major cities around the world.

This change of lifestyle can have some negative effects on individuals and the society as a whole. Firstly low birthrates can result in an ageing population and a lack of labor force in the future. Medical care service will be in high demand and medical cost will rise significantly.

Living alone without long term and stable relationships is widely thought to be associated with personal sense of happiness, which would reduce an individual’s general satisfaction with life, but increase the sense of isolation.

Traditionally, cultures and values are passed on in family daily life. However, in modern cities, the young generation living away from the older one have little chance to learn any from their parents. Instead, they are being assimilated by globally popular cultures.