【新六級直擊考點---綜合改錯題】『NO.13』
錯誤類型 (想看具體之前解題方法直接點擊)
1.邏輯表達錯誤 2.介詞使用錯誤 3.代詞使用錯誤 4.非謂語動詞使用錯誤 5.主謂語前后不一致錯誤 ? 6.名詞的使用錯誤?7.冠詞的使用錯誤8.詞性使用錯誤 9.句子結(jié)構(gòu)的錯誤 10.時態(tài)語態(tài)和語氣的使用錯誤 11.易混淆詞的使用錯誤。
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九、句子結(jié)構(gòu)的錯誤?
在英語中按句型來說可以分為陳述句、疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句四種，從結(jié)構(gòu)上來說又可以分為簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句三種。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤是構(gòu)成句子完整結(jié)構(gòu)的某一成分用錯或者缺少，或者使用了多于成分而造成句意不清的錯誤類型。由于英語語法和漢語語法特點在結(jié)構(gòu)上表現(xiàn)得十分明顯，主、謂、賓結(jié)構(gòu)在數(shù)、格、人稱上的一致、連接手段的正確使用以及詞序安排等，都與漢語有著相當大的差異，因此在改錯中也是一大難點。句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤類型包括：句子類型使用錯誤、句子成分短缺、平行結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤以及詞組搭配使用錯誤。
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例 1Computer analyzed marketing reports can help
deciding which products to emphasize now, which
to develop for the future, and which to be dropped.????????????????????????? 1.__________
本句中三個平行成分 which products to emphasize now, which to develop for the future, and which to be dropped 結(jié)構(gòu)模式應(yīng)該一致，均采用不定式主動語態(tài)，因而 to be dropped 應(yīng)改為 to drop 。
When we consider the comfortable circumstances
of a working family today, the life of the workingman
in 1882 seems miserable indeed. But earlier it had
been ever hard.???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? 1.__________
根據(jù)上文中“ earlier ”可知，原句顯然是將 1882 年以前的生活與 1882 年時的生活作比較，所以此處 hard 應(yīng)該改為 harder 。
At the beginning of the nineteenth century working
hours were from sunrise to sunset, pay was awful,
and working conditions being poor and dangerous.??????????????????????????? 1.__________
在該句中， working hours were from sunrise to sunset, pay was awful, and working conditions being poor and dangerous 三個小分句為并列結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，因此必須保持成分和結(jié)構(gòu)上的一致性，故應(yīng)該將 being 改為 were 。
However, a second person thought that this was
more a question of civilized behavior as good??????????????????????????????????? 1.__________
manners.
“ more…than… ”是固定搭配用法，在此句中表示“與其…不如…”的意思，而不是“比…多”的意思；沒有“ more…as… ”的搭配用法，故應(yīng)該將 as 改為 than 。
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練習(xí)題
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1 On the contrary, the intimate atmosphere of the
small college allows the student four years of structural
living in which to expect and preparing for the real world.?????????????????? 1.__________
the student must, therefore, consider a great many factors.
Going to school is part of the socialization process,
and so going to the movies.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? 2.__________
3 The next morning the sun rose like a red ball on the
eastern horizon. But somehow after breakfast it hid
itself behind patches of clouds but it seemed a rain was???????????????????? 3.__________
apparent.
4 But luckily, no sooner had we entered the car when it???????????????????? 4.__________
suddenly began to rain.
5 That is worthy of note about these two groups is that????????????????????5.__________
among the 40 people there are only two women.
6 Women members are so less than members that we??????????????????????6.__________
again think of the outdated prejudice that women are
inferior in intelligence.
7 The best way to avoid using dictionaries when you
are reading English books is to try to remember many?????????????????????? 7.__________
words as you can.
8 It is just on that day when I bumped into Miss Helen????????????????????? 8.__________
on my way to work.
9 It is in the cinema not on the street where he lost his???????????????????? 9.__________
wallet which contained ＄
undersea, and special underwater ships will be designed
for mining, fishing, and to exploring unknown areas.???????????????????????? 10.__________?
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