【雅思寫作】十大常見錯誤透析(上)
作者:諸瑞琪
來源:滬江博客/朗閣海外考試研究中心
2010-12-31 13:20
詞性誤用(misuse of parts of speech)
分析認為,詞性誤用通常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當動詞用,形容詞當副詞用,名詞當動詞用等,如:
1. None can negative the importance of money.
分析:
Negative是形容詞,誤作動詞使用。
改為:None can deny the importance of money.
指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要指代詞與被指代的人或物關系不清,或者先后使用的代詞不一致,如:
1. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to become her bridesmaid.
分析:
讀完上面這句話后,作者無法明確判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚,誰將當伴娘。如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對象明確,意思就一目了然了。
改為:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to become her bridesmaid.
2. We can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析:
句中代詞we和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。
改為:We can also know the society by serving it ourselves.
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