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GRE高分作文五大要點(diǎn)
要給自己30分鐘的壓力,先列出提綱(10分鐘),再用30分鐘去寫(xiě),看能寫(xiě)多少。 五、選材準(zhǔn)確: 記住你的舉例一定要死死扣住你的GRE作文觀點(diǎn),不要是和觀點(diǎn)打擦邊球的。比如我改過(guò)之前一個(gè)小朋友的文章,她的大觀點(diǎn)是電腦對(duì)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)是有益的,小觀點(diǎn)是,可以查到很多資料,然后例子是可以用google查到很多資料,很快捷。 ok,乍一看這個(gè)沒(méi)有問(wèn)題。但是實(shí)際上問(wèn)題大了,用goole查到很多資料,是因?yàn)殡娔X還是internet?這很容易就偏題了,變成internet 對(duì)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)是有益的。例子一定要從論點(diǎn)出發(fā),再回到論點(diǎn)。不要將你的論點(diǎn)發(fā)散,后果很可能就是越寫(xiě)越跑題。所以每次寫(xiě)好一篇文章,都看看,論據(jù)里的key words是不是和論點(diǎn)里的key words 一樣,論點(diǎn)里的key words又是不是和題目里的key words一樣。你的key words 可以比大題里的key words更加narrow,但是千萬(wàn)不要更加廣泛。 邏輯錯(cuò)誤是GRE作文段落中邏輯比較容易錯(cuò)的。一般是對(duì)接續(xù)詞的運(yùn)用。如However, thus, therefore,他們決定了上下文之間的關(guān)系,但是很多讀起來(lái)就很奇怪,兩者完全不是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系,用了however,就會(huì)讓人覺(jué)得有些無(wú)厘頭?;蛘呔褪巧舷挛闹g完全沒(méi)有邏輯聯(lián)系,就是兩個(gè)單句湊在了一起。還是這句話,一篇文章和流水似的,不能斷。中間斷了那就不叫好文章了。即使前一句與有一句沒(méi)有接續(xù)詞,它們?cè)谶壿嬌弦彩且艹薪拥?。想要去的GRE寫(xiě)作滿分,則一定要在邏輯上完美無(wú)缺。
2015-05-18 -
GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句
在GRE作GRE作文中,句子的作用是無(wú)容置疑的,大家在復(fù)習(xí)作文的時(shí)候,不妨背記一些好的句式和句子。一來(lái)可以在考場(chǎng)上拿來(lái)就用,二來(lái)也可以鍛煉自己的組織詞匯的能力。本文為大家分享的200句經(jīng)典句子,推薦大家有選擇地背,靈活運(yùn)用在GRE作文考試中。 GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(一) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(二) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(三) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(四) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(五) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(六) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(七) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(八) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(九) GRE作文考試必備經(jīng)典200句(十)
2014-05-27 -
GRE作文考試易丟分的地方
要給自己30分鐘的壓力,先列出提綱(10分鐘),再用30分鐘去寫(xiě),看能寫(xiě)多少。 五、選材準(zhǔn)確 記住你的舉例一定要死死扣住你的新GRE作文觀點(diǎn),不要是和觀點(diǎn)打擦邊球的。GRE考試中例子一定要從論點(diǎn)出發(fā),再回到論點(diǎn)。不要將你的論點(diǎn)發(fā)散,后果很可能就是越寫(xiě)越跑題。所以每次寫(xiě)好一篇文章,都看看,論據(jù)里的key words是不是和論點(diǎn)里的key words一樣,論點(diǎn)里的key words又是不是和題目里的key words一樣。你的key words 可以比大題里的key words更加narrow,但是千萬(wàn)不要更加廣泛。
2015-06-11 -
GRE作文高分備考有妙招
解決而沉溺于題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)中,往往是事倍功半。如果不能透徹地了解自己的語(yǔ)法或者思維方式錯(cuò)誤的根源在哪里,而去備考,寄 希望于考試時(shí)考到自己做過(guò)的題目,這種做法是非常危險(xiǎn)的。考生可以用實(shí)踐-理論-實(shí)踐這種螺旋式的進(jìn)步方法,先找到問(wèn)題,然后有針對(duì)性地進(jìn)行系統(tǒng)性的學(xué) 習(xí),打好基礎(chǔ);感覺(jué)有提高了再來(lái)實(shí)踐,再GRE作文發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題再提高。 最后,提醒考生:在GRE備考的過(guò)程中重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備提綱,選擇性地練習(xí)實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫(xiě)作。題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)有兩個(gè)問(wèn)題:一是沒(méi)有解決根本問(wèn)題,二 是機(jī)會(huì)成本過(guò)高。所謂機(jī)會(huì)成本,就是你花的時(shí)間過(guò)多,而這些時(shí)間本來(lái)可以用來(lái)做更有意義的事情,比如說(shuō)記單詞,學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)法或者看書(shū)開(kāi)拓思路。所以,小編覺(jué)得 打基礎(chǔ)的同時(shí),要把重點(diǎn)放在提綱也就是思路的準(zhǔn)備上。在Argument也許用不著每個(gè)都準(zhǔn)備提綱,但issue
2015-06-27 -
新GRE寫(xiě)作Argument范文(一)
新GRE寫(xiě)作對(duì)于國(guó)內(nèi)考生比較難的一個(gè)問(wèn)題就是中國(guó)人的思維與西方人不同,所以寫(xiě)作的方式也不太一樣。因此,大家可以通過(guò)參考一些優(yōu)秀的新GRE作文的范文來(lái)提高自己的寫(xiě)作水平。 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products. "Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store in Painesville, which has many such residents. Painesville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Painesville's schoolchildren are required to participate in a 'fitness for life' program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age." 2.The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deer haven Acres to all homeowners in Deer haven Acres. "Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deer haven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and house painting." 3.The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis. "In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students at a leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to them than job satisfaction. This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours they must work." 4."Of the two leading real estate firms in our town---Adams Realty and Fitch Realty---Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams." 各位考生在新GRE寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)思維邏輯的重視,平時(shí)注意積累論據(jù)論證素材,注意借鑒一些新GRE寫(xiě)作范文,從中吸取對(duì)自己有利的寫(xiě)作經(jīng)驗(yàn),完善自己的作文。
2015-01-10 -
新GRE寫(xiě)作Argument范文(三)
新GRE寫(xiě)作對(duì)于國(guó)內(nèi)考生比較難的一個(gè)問(wèn)題就是中國(guó)人的思維與西方人不同,所以寫(xiě)作的方式也不太一樣。因此,大家可以通過(guò)參考一些優(yōu)秀的新GRE作文的范文來(lái)提高自己的寫(xiě)作水平。 Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper. "The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure both lower prices and an adequate supply of milk for consumers." 2.The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg. "Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Egg’s landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents’ strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted." 3.The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing. "During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep." 4.The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small business serving a suburban town. "There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own -vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the gardening magazine Great Gardens has sold out at the Village News stand three months in a row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring." graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors." 各位考生在新GRE寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)思維邏輯的重視,平時(shí)注意積累論據(jù)論證素材,注意借鑒一些新GRE寫(xiě)作范文,從中吸取對(duì)自己有利的寫(xiě)作經(jīng)驗(yàn),完善自己的作文。
2015-01-10 -
新GRE寫(xiě)作Argument范文(二)
新GRE寫(xiě)作對(duì)于國(guó)內(nèi)考生比較難的一個(gè)問(wèn)題就是中國(guó)人的思維與西方人不同,所以寫(xiě)作的方式也不太一樣。因此,大家可以通過(guò)參考一些優(yōu)秀的新GRE作文的范文來(lái)提高自己的寫(xiě)作水平。? Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. 1.The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. "A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money." 2.The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Clear view newspaper. "In the next mayoral election, residents of Clear view should vote for Ann Green, who is a member of the Good Earth Coalition, rather than for Frank Braun, a member of the Clear view town council, because the current members are not protecting our environment. For example, during the past year the number of factories in Clear view has doubled, air pollution levels have increased, and the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses. If we elect Ann Green, the environmental problems in Clear view will certainly be solved." 3.The following appeared in a memorandum issued by the strategic planning department at Omni Inc. "Mesa Foods, a manufacturer of snack foods that currently markets its products within a relatively small region of the country, has strong growth potential. Mesa enjoyed a 20 percent increase in profits last year, and its best-selling product, Diabolique Salsa, has had increased sales over each of the past three years. Since Omni Inc. is interested in reaching 14-to-25 year olds, the age group that consumes the most snack food, we should buy Mesa Foods, and concentrate in particular on marketing Diabolique Salsa throughout the country." 4.The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University. "Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors." 各位考生在新GRE寫(xiě)作練習(xí)中應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)思維邏輯的重視,平時(shí)注意積累論據(jù)論證素材,注意借鑒一些新GRE寫(xiě)作范文,從中吸取對(duì)自己有利的寫(xiě)作經(jīng)驗(yàn),完善自己的作文。
2015-01-10 -
GRE寫(xiě)作絕佳300句(十九)
to say, advertising sells products. Where would we be without it ? Shelves would be empty, consumers would have few choices and products information would disappear. 毋庸諱言,廣告推銷(xiāo)產(chǎn)品。沒(méi)有它,情況將會(huì)怎樣?貨架將空空如也,消費(fèi)者的選擇將減少,產(chǎn)品的信息將消失。 GRE作文在保證邏輯思維和框架完整的情況下,備考的時(shí)候多多準(zhǔn)備有用的句子,對(duì)大家獲得高分一定有所幫助。
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簡(jiǎn)析GRE考試作文模版的整理
就是大家必須自己去總結(jié)一些好的句子好的詞語(yǔ),然后在里面使用了,然后在以后看文章或者看材料的時(shí)候遇到了更好的句子時(shí)就會(huì)非常敏感,馬上用到以前寫(xiě)過(guò)的段子里。這樣在日積月累中,你的固定段落就會(huì)提升提升再提升,考場(chǎng)上用出來(lái)保準(zhǔn)出彩! 至于大家對(duì)雷同的底線到底在哪里的問(wèn)題,ETS規(guī)定好像是連續(xù)超過(guò)13個(gè)英文字相同就會(huì)判定為雷同,但是個(gè)人感覺(jué)應(yīng)該沒(méi)有那么死,因?yàn)橛幸恍┕潭ū磉_(dá)每個(gè)人都會(huì)用,有時(shí)候連起來(lái)肯定會(huì)超過(guò)13個(gè)英文字,所以不想雷同的同學(xué)除了固定搭配的那些不用擔(dān)心之外,其余的句子最好都是要靈活的蹂躪組合后再使用。 新GRE作文的模板復(fù)習(xí)是考生必須掌握的,在GRE考試中,對(duì)模板的整理能讓考生更直觀地認(rèn)識(shí)到新GRE寫(xiě)作該如何進(jìn)行,明白寫(xiě)作中GRE作文復(fù)習(xí)中一個(gè)比較重要的問(wèn)題??忌跍?zhǔn)備新GRE一些比較重要的或是容易被忽略的問(wèn)題。小編最后希望大家都能在寫(xiě)作中取得自己滿意的成績(jī)。
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GRE寫(xiě)作絕佳300句(二二)
本文的整理,主要幫助大家在GRE寫(xiě)作上積累足夠的句子以及有用的詞匯,大家在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也可以多多運(yùn)用它們。 ? 211. Traffic laws are of little use if drivers simply ignore them and law enforcement departments fail to adopt effective enforcement programs. 如果司機(jī)完全無(wú)視交通法,法律實(shí)施部門(mén)不能采取有效的實(shí)施程序,交通法就沒(méi)有一點(diǎn)兒作用。 212. Agricultural modernization cannot be achieved unless the government substantially increases funding; farmers accept advanced agronomic techniques; and consumers engaged in a concerted effort to reduce unnecessary and exorbitant waste. 除非政府大幅度地增加投資;農(nóng)民接受高級(jí)的農(nóng)業(yè)技術(shù);消費(fèi)者共同努力減少不必要的過(guò)度的浪費(fèi),農(nóng)業(yè)現(xiàn)代化就不能實(shí)現(xiàn)。 213. Effective flood control is not only necessary, but is also essential for protecting the lives of millions of Chinese citizens. 有效地控制洪水不僅是必要的,而且對(duì)保護(hù)數(shù)百萬(wàn)中國(guó)公民的生命來(lái)GRE說(shuō)是必不可少的。 214. Simple expressions of indignation are no substitute for meaningful actions to right a wrong. 僅僅表示憤慨不能取代改正錯(cuò)誤的有意義的行動(dòng)。 215. Even modest increases in education allocations are better than none. 甚至對(duì)教育撥款的適度增加都比不增加好。 216. The slightest miscalculations in trajectory can spell doom for a successful space mission. 對(duì)軌道的細(xì)小的計(jì)算錯(cuò)誤可以意味著對(duì)成功的太空任務(wù)的滅頂之災(zāi)。 217. Anyone with one eye and half sense ( common sense ) knows that good prevails over evil. 任何一個(gè)有一只眼睛和一半判斷力(常識(shí))的人都知道邪不壓正。 218. It is impossible to reach appropriate conclusions without access to relevant information. 沒(méi)有相關(guān)的信息不可能得出相關(guān)的結(jié)論。 219. The fact remains that the consequences of drug misuse and abuse can be devastating upon the entire community. 實(shí)際情況仍然是誤用和濫用藥物的后果對(duì)整個(gè)社會(huì)都會(huì)是破壞性的。 220. Respect is given where respect is due. 尊敬只給予值得尊敬的人。 GRE作文在保證邏輯思維和框架完整的情況下,備考的時(shí)候多多準(zhǔn)備有用的句子,對(duì)大家獲得高分一定有所幫助。