2010年12月英語四級(jí)作文范文及解析(昂立教育版)
1012四級(jí)作文范文參考:
How Should Parents Help Students to Be Independent
1、目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2、為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……
In recent years, floods of parents are willing to make arrangements and decisions for their children. And there’s no denying that a majority of children take their parents’ concern for granted. According to statistics, over 80% of parents still accompany their children to universities, even examinations. In this essay, I will discuss the measures that should be taken to help students be independent and offer my view on it.
First and foremost, parents should abandon the stereotyped role in Chinese parenting and render their children free to the fascinating world. Besides, they, the children themselves, should manage their own daily stuffs. In addition, the society should set up more courses and camps for children to cultivate their capability to be independent.
As far as I’m concerned, the all-covering parenting method may give rise to severe consequences, and a spoiled child won’t be competitive in this world, which is full of fierce competitions. Thus, the whole society should attach great importance to this problem and make our contribution to avoid this.
此次四級(jí)作文仍然是??嫉淖h論文文體。屬我們課堂上練習(xí)的第一類議論文:現(xiàn)象解釋型議論文。所考題目為父母包辦一切熱點(diǎn)話題型,所以寫作套路基本上可以按照我們hot issue 型模板進(jìn)行微調(diào)寫作。
此次應(yīng)試作文在寫作時(shí)還需要注意以下幾點(diǎn):
1、 文章directions 只有兩段,這樣按照平時(shí)的三段式作文的話,大家可以自由多加一段即可,比如在1和2之間加一個(gè)話題:比如父母包辦一切的原因;或者是此種做法帶來的后果等等。
2、 第一段在引入話題的時(shí)候,可以用我們課上所講畫面內(nèi)容中譯英的方法,將大家首先想到的內(nèi)容用英文表達(dá)出來。
3. 在講原因或者影響及措施時(shí), 大家可以結(jié)合社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí),家長溺愛孩子和現(xiàn)在的孩子獨(dú)立性差都表現(xiàn)在哪些方面,如:生活不能自理,甚至升學(xué),進(jìn)大學(xué)以后,更有甚者工作后的“啃老族”等等都可以寫,相應(yīng)的措施也應(yīng)從家長,社會(huì)及孩子本身等方面寫起。
4、就題目而言,independent 是四級(jí)高頻詞匯,在寫的過程中,一定不能在出新拼寫錯(cuò)誤,那樣失分就可惜了。
此次作文整體話題特點(diǎn)仍然是越來越貼近實(shí)事,內(nèi)容是大家關(guān)注的家庭教育方面??傮w構(gòu)架并不難,估計(jì)廣大考生在這次的作文中不會(huì)有太大失分!對(duì)于以后的四級(jí)寫作話題趨勢(shì),希望考生還是可以關(guān)注教育類高頻詞匯,文章模板還是以解釋型議論文為主。
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